corrections are rarely needed before signature. Insome situations, you will be the one to determinethe type of correspondence to be used. To fulfillthose requirements, you must understand thebasic policies and procedures for preparing thevarious types of correspondence.Preparation of CorrespondenceYou or someone else at the departmental levelprepares the rough draft of official outgoingcorrespondence. Persons of higher authoritywithin the department then “chop,” or edit, therough before it is sent to the executive officer orthe administrative assistant for approval. Basedon that premise, we will not attempt to explainand illustrate minute details regarding formatrequirements. The Department of the NavyCorrespondence Manual, SECNAV Instruction5216.5C, amply covers format requirements.However, the last section of this chapter coversnaval writing standards.Before starting the letter, decide whetheryou should use a Navy Mailed Message (NAV-GRAM), a message, or a routine memorandum.That will require you to determine the nature ofthe communication. First, be sure exactly whatthe communication should accomplish. Next,consider factors such as format, references,enclosures, and the type of communication re-quired.When preparing correspondence, bear in mindthat the usual purpose of Navy mail is to providethe reader with concisely stated information.If you turn out a confused, rambling, lengthymasterpiece, you only create an editing chore forthe drafting officer. You may wind up doing thewhole thing over. The following are some of theusual causes of confusion and rambling in a letter:Failure to follow the basic pattern of thesubject (purpose, circumstances, action)Inclusion of more than a single ideain a sentence, more than one centralthought in a paragraph, or more than asingle subject in the letterFailure to consider the readers (Can theymisinterpret your wording?)Once you understand what the letter is toaccomplish, you should follow certain steps toensure good organization and continuity:1. Arrange information in a logical order.2. Complete each unit of information beforemoving on to the next.3. Maintain continuity by providing transitionfrom one unit of information to another.In the first paragraph, state the purpose of theletter. In the following paragraphs, explain thecircumstances and the action to be taken (giveorders, make requests, give consent, or refusepermission). Be sure you follow a logical order;for example, first explain the problem (orcircumstance); then give each step the readershould take to resolve the problem. Maintaincontinuity by showing the connection between onepoint of information and the next. For example,you might tell the reader certain informationinvolves several methods and then immediatelyname those methods.When the letter is in answer to or closelyrelated to another letter, the first sentence shouldrefer to that letter.Example: 1. Reference (a) requested informa-tion about the allowance lists forthe next 3 fiscal years. Reference (b)pointed out that such informa-tion is available for only 2 years inadvance . . . .No rule exists about the number of paragraphsone unit of information should contain. In lettersof average length, each significant unit ofinformation may be one paragraph. However,some units of information may require more thanone paragraph to explain. Other explanations maybe so simple that a single paragraph makes up theentire body of the correspondence. No matter howmany paragraphs you write, be sure to follow therules for good organization and continuity.TARGET DATE. —The first step you shouldtake when assigned a writing task is to determinethe deadline or target date of the correspondence.That will allow you to budget your time effec-tively. Remember, not only must you draft thecorrespondence, but you must allow for othersto review, revise, and type the correspondence.Then the final or smooth copy must be reviewed,corrected, and signed before the correspondenceis released.FIRST DRAFT. —Before writing the firstdraft of any correspondence, refer to any relatedcorrespondence to see how it is organized andworded. Note all the points you should cover.2-37
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